NaPoWriMo Challenge: Day 30


sense of paralysis

gaps in comprehension

rapid heartbeat

dryness in the throat

the mouth as well

eyes flashing

one memory after another

gasping for air

as if stabs here and there


could never say goodbye


Filed under Poetry

5 responses to “NaPoWriMo Challenge: Day 30

  1. I’m so sorry Hulya, I think my moments got mixed up! Yours got poted somewhere else – cant remember now!

    Just want to say tht this struck a chord…a powerful description of grief if ever there was one!


  2. What a brilliant shot!! You’re so lucky you got close, I have rotten luck with butterflies 😦


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