Comment/Feedback 1:
This is a well-written short story with a withering tone that has a welcoming feel and walks the reader through the different aspects of the writer’s inner emotions. Hulya in her descriptions creates a vivid world through paying attention to details and providing elaborate images. The descriptions are heartfelt as they make the reader feel like in the author’s shoes experiencing her waning journey. She carefully leads her readers from one interesting aspect of her life and family history to another and also includes a descriptive and expressive poem about her hometown. Overall, it is a very well-written work that leaves the reader with the choice of categorizing it as a ‘memoir’ or ‘fiction’ and as a reader I enjoy this assignment.
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